Final Animation Link and Evaluation 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ayvWdjzv4Bw&feature=youtu.be

In my evaluation I feel it didn't go as well as I like because I was trying a concept art piece meaning I drew out the parts I would like to feature in the animation. As I drew out the sections I feel that it didn't flow as well through because I didn't draw the sections thoroughly and in detail so it feels that it jumps through giving that feeling of something missing. I thought I could of drew out the sections better and possibly using a different material rather than pen, I believe that I should of used paint so you wouldn't see the different lines in the drawing pieces. However with the drawings I feel that it did work with in the age bracket I was drawing for and it does have that cartoon, child effect drawing I was going for. 

When I placed the drawings into after effects and placed the type on drawings I found it was difficult to display the type with the speed of the drawings were going because I had to keep the them to look like a form of flip book. So I found a balance where you can read the type I've displayed with the speed of the drawings going through but I feel that its still going through to quickly meaning there isn't enough time to read the type. However I feel the title works well as a piece showing a handwritten style, I tried to portray an effect that it is hand written. 

Overall if I do this project again I believe I would keep the same concept as doing concept art because that is a part of motion graphic I'm mostly interested into. What I would do to make this animation better I would draw the parts in more detail and draw more of the sections to make it more flow better and so it wouldn't jump to different sections.